barbara seraphina woods !

[canndee2]

"Where's that manual?" - Barbie

NAME: Barbara Seraphina Woods
NICKNAMES: Barb, Blondie
AGE: Twenty-three
BIRTHDAY: November the fifth
ORIENTATION: Straight
NATIONALITY: Fantasian
OCCUPATION: Manager at a clothes shop in the mall
PLAYED BY: Taylor Swift
DISNEY: Barbie
USER GROUP: Sex Symbol

PERSONALITY !

NATURAL LEADER! Barbara might look like your typical blonde, but she isn't. At all! She is actually really good with words and talks a lot. Therefore she is kind of the one being in charge. And not enough with her being a the natural leader, she is kind. She is a fair manager, compared to her former boss who treated her like hell just because she was a girl. Barbara treats her employees with lots of respect and they all get paid the same no matter what gender they have. Barb can't stand those nasty old men who are just hiring to have something to look on. Meaning young women. That is so disrespectful. Barbara is continuing to fight on with her eternal battle.

ROMANTIC! Barbara is very romantic and loves being treated good by her boyfriend. For example she is sucker for sweet words and giggles a lot whenever she finds it too cute. Valentines day is her favorite day of the entire year, because even though she gives, she also gets a lot of attention. And not unlike any other girl, Barbara dreams about getting married in a big church, in a big, white dress. Weddings is one of the most romantic things, in her opinion.

FICKLE! Barbara can be a bit of a drama queen. Sometimes she gets mad over the smallest thing and she often breaks up with her boyfriend over a very tiny thing. But it won't last long, because Barbara loves him over everything! Most of the time she loves him, but sometimes she is just too fed up with him and his metrosexualism. It can be too much. But Barbara isn't only indecisive when it comes to her boyfriend - but also when it comes to picking out clothes. She is the manager in a clothes shop in the mall so she can get all the clothes she wants and that is no problem. The problem is choosing the perfect outfit for a night out.


QUIRKS:
+ Giggles a lot
+ Likes to wear colorful, bright clothes
+ Wears a lot of dresses
+ Very into fashion and designers
+ VERY indecisive
+ Quite squeaky voice

LIKES: weddings, romance, her boyfriend, pink, dresses, clothes, her job, friends, talking, flirting, her cellphone, pop music
DISLIKES: enemies, animals, rain, snow, being labelled as "a stupid blonde", evil people, alcohol, rap music, hiphop music, mess

HISTORY !

Barbara was born to Paul and Marge Woods in Fantasia. She was the first born and after three years, her sister Stacey was born. Barbara and Stacey had a lot of fun and when Barb was six her youngest sister Shelly was born. The three girls was best friends and soon after Shelly was born, Barbara started in school. From the beginning, she wasn't the brightest girl, but there was a few others that were more "stupid" than her. She followed and had a great time. In a very young age it was clear that Barbara knew what she wanted to do with her life. She wanted to become manager of a clothing shop. It wasn't nothing big, but for a girl like Barbara is was all she wanted so she knew she had to do her best.

She did and she came in High School and she struggled, but she did it. When she was a junior in High School, she met her current on/off boyfriend Kenneth. They are still on/off. But Barbara loves him very much! In her spare time she fought an almost eternal battle to make men and women to have the same rights, and she is still doing that! it was because she had a job in a small shop and felt like she was cheated from a good promotion that a boy got instead of her. And Barbara was smart enough to see it was because she was a girl. Therefore she decided to fight for equal rights for men and female. Barbara graduated and moved on to college. It was tough but she did it and got a degree in business administration. Kenneth was the one that helped her through. After she graduated from college she took a year of where she travelled with her boyfriend.

Now she is 23 and was recently promoted to be the manager of the store she is working in and life is perfect! She is still using her sparetime on fighting the big difference between men and female payments! It is something that bothers her a lot, and she needs to do something about it!

SAMPLE !

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ABOUT YOU!

OHHAITHUR, I'M CANNDEE AND I'M A PRETTY SUPERMEGAFOXYAWESOMESEXY PERSON. I'M 20, BUT DON'T FRET YO, I THINK THIS PLACE IS AMAZING. I'M SO GLAD I FOUND IT THROUGH WAS HERE ALREADY. OH, AND JUST SO YOU KNOW, MY FAVORITE DISNEY MOVIE IS LION KING

[canndee2]

bitmiş

(means "finished" in azerbaijan language! xD)

[. NIKKI MOUSE]

Okay, there are only a few little things I'd like you to address.

First, your "protagonist" trait is kind of all over the place. A protagonist is the main character of a story. You description hits on a lot of different notes: natural leader, feminist, and supportive, but none of them really describe "protagonist." Maybe just pick one trait you mention and expand on that some more. Or, if you'd like, talk about all of them in separate paragraphs. Remember, you can have up to five traits in your personality section.

Secondly, I think the idea of a kind of ditzy feminist is intriguing and unique, but you don't really talk about why she originally developed a passion for fighting against the pay gap between men and women. Maybe she realized that she was being paid less than another male manager. Maybe she got passed over for a promotion because of her looks. Anything, really. Just one sentence in the history can really help explain this trait.

Lastly, "indecisive" doesn't seem to be the right word for your last trait. You seem to describe "capricious" or "frivolous" or "fickle." There are a lot of possibilities This is just a small thing, but it's always good to use precise language.

Anyways, I don't expect you to majorly re-write this app. Mostly, I just ask that you move some things around and make some small changes. After that, we should all good.

[canndee2]

changed (:

[. NIKKI MOUSE]