jasmine adalia ahmadi ! (finished!)

[JASMINE ADALIA AHMADI]

"I am not a prize to be won" - jasmine

NAME: jasmine adalia ahmadi
NICKNAMES: jaz, jazzy
AGE: eighteen
BIRTHDAY: september 2nd
ORIENTATION: straight
NATIONALITY: arabian
OCCUPATION: high school senior
PLAYED BY: camilla belle
DISNEY: princess jasmine
USER GROUP: high school senior

PERSONALITY !

HEADSTRONG ! Jasmine is very very headstrong. She is a free spirit- she does what she wants to do and no one can tell her otherwise. This makes her a bit on the stubborn side of the spectrum. She has a strong will and much will power. This can be a bad thing sometimes- if it came to is she would be able to push away people she is close to in order to fufill whatever she is aiming for.

FIESTY ! Fiesty, fire cracker, a bit sassy, these are all words to describe Jazzy. She doesn't take any crap form anyone, regardless of who you are. She won't go up and start being a bitch or start a fight, however if you throw the first punch she won't be afraid to hit back. Her fiestiniess is one of the most noticiable aspects of her personality because it is such a strong characteristic.

WITTY ! Jasmine very smart, especially in a logical sense. She doesn't have much street smarts, but she has enough logic to know who and where to stay away from. She picks up on things quick because she is good at putting fragments of a story together. Her wit leads her to be quick at the mouth and for smart comments. When she is in a good mood, her comments are humorous.

QUIRKS:

LIKES: sunshine, summer, food, music, teal, volleyball, roses, freedom, humor, animals, adventure.
DISLIKES: lightning, idiots, rudeness, radishes, cranberry juice, creeps, tulips, rap, authority, cowards.

HISTORY !

Jasmine was born into royalty- that’s right, she’s a princess. She grew up with a dominant father figure since her mother passes away when she was still a baby. He was reasonable and a good guy in her eyes, but he seemed to care too much for his daughter. He was overprotective and a bit controlling. For a while, Jasmine wasn’t allowed outside of the palace. In their homeland, women has little rights, which is probably why Jaz hates authority. Anyways, she was blessed with having lessons as a young child. She was a quick learner then and that trait is still in her. By the age of seven she was literate. After the basics of math, reading, history and the basics of science came the real hard lessons- how to be a princess and a queen.

When Jazzy was eleven, her country was attacked and the royal family had to flee. That’s how they came about Fantasia City. They stayed there and still remain here because they were over ruled, meaning they aren’t officially royalty anymore. However, they were still rich and still are rich, and her father insisted that she still take lessons to be a proper lady. Jasmine continued these lessons for the sake of her father even though she despised them.

When Jasmine was seventeen her father began looking for guys for her to marry without her apporival she decided enough was enough- she told her father she hated the lessons and that she wanted to be free and in control of her own future. Her father disagreed so she ran away. She didn’t leave Fantasia City, this place is her home after all. She got a job and now lives in a small apartment by herself. She continues school and continues her job as a low income waitress at a local restaurant but she doesn’t mind. She is in control of her own life and in her eyes free.

SAMPLE !

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Hogwarts’s house elves definitely knew how to make a great sandwich. As Madi took another bite, she turned her head to face Zane, hearing his voice start going and words coming from his lips. She raised an eyebrow, taken aback by his sharp, rude comment. She swallowed her bite down swiftly, not caring about taking her time anymore. ”What’s wrong with your attitude? Bad letter from mummy?” she retorted with a smirk in response to him asking about her wincing. Obviously this guy was very observant…And either pissed off or just plain rude. She flipped her head, making the blonde bangs that were sliding into her eyes fall back into their side swept place as she took another bite.

Her sandwich was just about gone at this point which sucked because she was still hungry. Oh well, she thought, beginning to think about dinner and then her mind slid onto her next class. Potions. Eeeeeccch… she mentally complained. She hated that class with a passion- it’s not like she was going to use anything but healing potions or Polyjuice potion when she was older (although she wasn’t sure what she was going to do in the future). ”Anyways grumpy pants, where’s all your friends or whatever?” she asked, looking around a bit and wondering why he was so alone. Like, she could see him not having much company around because of the sour note they started on…But everyone had to have friends, right?

Right, because a normal human being can’t function without friends and social interaction. The consequences of solitude for too long could be as bad as insanity and other mental disorders…Although, she doubted this fellow she was sitting next to could have been alone for that long without girl stalking him and harassing him for romantic attention. After all, he wasn’t bad looking. Madison tapped her foot lightly to a song she had stuck in her head and turned to face the guy she was seated next to. She had to admit- he was very good looking, between his dark hair, big brown eyes and the muscles on his arms. Let’s hope he wasn’t a jerk twenty four seven.

ABOUT YOU!

OHHAITHUR, I'M LILY AND I'M A PRETTY HYPER PERSON. I'M FIFTEEN, BUT DON'T FRET YO, I THINK THIS PLACE IS AMAZING. I'M SO GLAD I FOUND IT THROUGH AN AD. OH, AND JUST SO YOU KNOW, MY FAVORITE DISNEY MOVIE IS THE LITTLE MERMAID

[. TINKER EM]

Hi there.

I'm going to have to say this app is pending. I'm only a trial admin, though, and if the other admins think that this is a totally quality application then I'll let them accept it. First of all, you have some spelling errors, and so I'd take a look through and fix those.

For your personality, Jasmine has no bad traits. She's all fantastic and great and that's not how a real character is, and what we call a "mary sue." I'd suggest going in and really developing those traits as well, and adding in a negative and a positive side to each. The traits you chose have negative sides as well. Headstrong can be a good thing, but it can also be looked at as belligerent, etc. etc. A thesaurus is your best friend!

For history, I just think that her being an actual princess is super unrealistic. Nowhere in "Aladdin" does Jasmine actually flee her country, that's more, like Anastasia I guess you could say. I'd say try and rework it so that it follows more of the plot line of the movie, maybe.

Let me know if you have any other questions. Thanks!

[. NIKKI MOUSE]

Hey dear,
Just wanted to say I agree with Em, but I have a few things to add. For one, your personality paragraphs could be a bit longer, and you forgot quirks. Thanks.

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[. TINKER EM]

It has been seven days since you posted this application and it is not complete. It has been moved to abandoned. However if you would like to still complete this, contact a staff member and it will be moved back for you.

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